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Thursday, 30 June 2011

A Tale of Two Sisters - An' The Adverb's a Cissy!


A TALE OF TWO SISTERS:

I haven't blogged here for such a long time and I apologise, dear readers.  But there's a reason - a good reason, honest!
My sister Barbara came to visit from the hot deserty salty air of Karratha in the North West of Australia for six weeks, armed with a Brit Rail pass for two - and we travelled the length and breadth of England, trekked hither and thither, investigated every bit of woodland, moorland and craggy landscape we could find. We saw wildlife galore in the strangest places, doing the strangest things!
Seagull eating chips in St Ives

Squirrel in Sefton Park, Liverpool
Red Robin, Red Lion, Dittisham, Devon

Hareshaw Linn, Northumberland
Bunny on Northumbria University Campus, Newcastle


St Bees nr. Whitehaven, Cumbria

Preening Swan at Windermere






Digitalis Overdose in Durham!

  
Heron up a Weeping Willow, St James's Park, London
Moorhen makes a nest in Dover
Family of Ducks in Calais









We flew to Corfu for a week of wonderful wild scenery awash with birds, butterflies and beautiful critters.
Beautiful Butterfly settles on Ground
Stunning Bird in Treetops

Tortoise Crossing the Road
 
Yellow Butterfly in the Pink (Orange?)
Cheekiest Parrot EVER!
Window-Box Wild Cat?




We rediscovered our roots in LOVERLY LIVERPOOL.

Back to my street in Liverpool 1
My Nanna's house in Liverpool 15



In short, we had a BALL and I'll blog each trip in GLORIOUS DETAIL - so - WATCH THIS SPACE!

WRITE ON:

On 16th June, I was published FOR THE SECOND TIME by the fabulous FLASH FICTION CHRONICLES with a tongue-in-cheek, 'about writing', piece about the ADVERB.

 Here's the link:

Flash Fiction Chronicles: Adverb: Amigo or Adversary
...and if you go to the 'Little Leaf Guesthouse' Facebook page at:
you'll find 'Adverb' posted there too!!  Thank you Little Leaf - the best B and B not only in St Ives, Cornwall, but in the whole country too!!

 My commissioned article about GORGEOUS LA GREZE and the stunning countryside and hilltop villages of the MIDI-PYRENEES in Southern France has been published online by TRIFTER.  Here's the link:
Gorgeous La Greze of the Tarn
John and Judi of La Greze
So...thank you for your patience constant readers...
...And I'll talk to you soon

Thursday, 24 February 2011

A Spring in My Step


Well, I reckon spring is just around the corner - and if we're due another cold snap, the garden knows nothing about it!  Although my winter tubs of blooms are still in full flow...

... the hyacinths and daffs and tulips are sprouting lovely green shoots.

My spring bulbs are starting to peep out of the ground.  The snowdrops are in full flow

and the crocuses in the garden and on the lawn are gleaming their magic colours.   
My cats are starting to get a spring in their steps - and SO AM I!!    









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WRITE ON...

It came as a bit of a shock to me this week, that a critique of my flash fiction story, BED OF ROSES, showed an 'average' rating.  I was diasappointed, disgruntled, f-f-furious!  But when I went back in to the story, I realised that my reviewer was absolutely right - I'd cocked up big-style.

I hadn't kept my writing TIGHT and I'd thrown in so many pesky ADVERBS, it was untrue.  So I took the story back and edited it before submitting to a writing competition on Fan Story.  What a difference.  Now I'm like a dog with two tails - I've LEARNED a lot about writing flash fiction.
Well, folks, the upshot of it was that the person who'd critiqued an 'average' had WON the competition - and I came 5th out of 13 competitiors, so in the end, I didn't do so badly...

The moral of this story is ALWAYS LISTEN TO THE VOICE OF YOUR CRITICS - you'll be a better writer for listening to advice instead of blowing a gasket!

If you'd like to read 'Bed of Roses', here's the link:

BED OF ROSES

and if you'd like to read my 3-5-3 haiku poem about spring flowers, just to keep you in 'spring mode', here's the link:


SPRING WOODLAND


If Spring is really nearly here......then my flowery cup, flowery top, flowery tights and flowers in my sparkly vase might have brought me a touch of good luck!
HERE'S HOPING!
                                                                            

TALK TO YOU SOON, CONSTANT READERS